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NEWS UPDATE

The final title of my second screenwriting book is: The Pleasures of Structure: Learning Screenwriting Through Case Studies. My deadline is 2014, although I’m hoping to beat that by a good distance, so it won’t be out for a good while yet.

In other news, I’ve submitted my big history chapter on Screenwriting in Another ‘New Hollywood’ 1980-1999. This is for a volume in the new Beyond the Silver Screen series from Rutgers UP. The series deals with film history through process more than product, writing the hidden histories of the crafts and departments that go into movie making. My chapter will be in the Screen Writing & Story Telling volume, edited by the wonderful Andy Horton, The Jeanne H. Smith Professor of Film Studies at The University of Oklahoma (Norman). 

As you will have seen, if you are an habitué de la blog, the first draft of Cutterjunk a spec screenplay I wrote as an experiment (my first attempt at science fiction) and a teaching tool, has been getting shortlisted in a number of screenwriting competitions. One of the next projects on my list is a comprehensive re-write. The new book, of which I already have a rough draft of 25,000 words or so, is after that!

Sequel volume to Write What You Don’t Know!

Dear interested reader(s), I just had some very welcome news from my publisher, Continuum Books in New York. After a successful peer review process they have accepted my proposal for a sequel volume to Write What You Don’t Know. We are in discussion over the title, but right now it is: Structure is Pleasure, learning screenwriting through case studies. I have a number of other writing projects on my plate at the moment, including a spec screenplay and a big chapter on screenwriting history for a forthcoming book from Rutgers UP, so the new book won’t appear for a while yet. I’ll keep you posted on this site of course.

Happy day!

Story Development with Julian Hoxter

STORY CONSULTATION AND SCRIPT DEVELOPMENT SERVICES:

I am pleased to announce that I am now able to take on limited additional private story consultation and script development work for screenplays and feature films. I regularly consult on independent feature films in development and in post production, and I offer a full range of services from a single script meeting through full story consulting on all stages of your project. If you are interested, please contact me for details and prices:

hoxter@btinternet.com

Recent testimonials:

“Julian was an invaluable story consultant on my more recent film, pushing me to ask essential questions. Always three steps ahead, with elegant solutions to what sometimes felt like insurmountable obstacles, he approached the material with a discerning eye.”

“He has story consulted on two of my films. His focus on story and structure all through a character’s needs really opened my eyes. For the first time I felt confident in my writing.”

“Your notes are right on and giving me a lot of clarity around what needs to be done.”

I have consulted on a wide range of feature projects at all stages of writing and production. I work with writers on story and script development; and I work with directors, polishing their stories in post production. In 2012, movies on which I consulted have been screened internationally at film festivals. I also consulted on a screenplay that was one of five selected for the prestigious Outfest Screenwriting Lab in LA.

Write What You Don’t Know photo competition

OK here’s a bit of fun for everyone. People have begun to tag and send me pictures of themselves with the book, or the book in strange company (see below), so I thought: why not have a little competition?

There will be a prize for the most imaginative use of Write What You Don’t Know in a photograph.

Go generate lots of creative energy – exactly the kind of thing the book is meant to encourage. There is no deadline right now. Let’s see if anyone actually enters and then I’ll work something out. I don’t know what the prize will be yet. The obvious choice of a copy of the book doesn’t really apply as the book will be in the picture… hmm. I’ll give it some thought. Remember to send your contact details with your photograph if I don’t know you to: hoxter@sfsu.edu

When Michael Bay attacks

Bryan's ceiling

What readers are saying

Please excuse the self promotion here, but part of the purpose of this blog is to get word out about my book Write What You Don’t Know: An Accessible Manual For Screenwriters. To that end I will post occasional extracts from reader reviews and comments about my teaching and story consulting – you know, just to lure the unwary into a purchase!

Here are a few to get us going:

“Julian was an invaluable story consultant on my more recent film, pushing me to ask… essential questions. Always 3 steps ahead with elegant solutions to what sometimes felt like insurmountable obstacles, he approached the material with a discerning eye and refreshing wit.”

“He has story consulted on two of my films. His focus on story and structure all through a character’s needs really opened my eyes. For the first time I felt confident in my writing.”

Write What You Don’t Know is Julian Hoxter’s amazing classes in a book. Witty, informative, and engaging. I love this book because he doesn’t talk at you. He talks to you. You feel like you’re in a conversation with the author. His British witticisms create a fun atmosphere where you enjoy reading and look forward to each page.”

“What I’m happy about is how much content there is, how dense the material; there’s so much rapid-fire delivery of so much to say, and all of it rewarding. On a scale, it makes many other screenwriting manuals feel a bit light.”

“This book is accessible but not dumbed down, with helpful illustrations on how to not only structure a screenplay but also how to create interesting characters and dialogue. Last year I read Save the Cat for my screenwriting class and was utterly annoyed by the writing. Seriously. But I read it, since there were some good tips in there. Write What You Don’t Know does what Save the Cat was trying to do: make a screenwriting book that is fun to read but has instrumental instructions on writing a script. And even though the book is aimed at a younger reader, I could completely relate with Hoxter’s ‘implied you’.”

“This book is a must read for anyone trying to write their own screenplay. I take that back, this book is a must read for anyone wanting to write a GOOD screenplay. I have read my fair share of screenwriting books, all claiming to be the bees knees, but this one put the rest to shame.”

This is a wonderful, funny, helpful, entertaining book. It is clearly aimed more at the new film student than the middle aged wannabe screenwriter (finally, a book that does this – thank you!). It takes care to create a friendly space for younger readers who, like me, are kind of daunted by the prospect of writing their first scripts. It is honest however and doesn’t pretend you are going to make millions of dollars and be instantly famous and all that rubbish.”

“He takes you through the process of getting ideas and developing your story by focusing on how his students develop their stories. That makes the first few chapters seem at first like a strange, windy road but as you are working through them you realize that he’s right. This is how I struggle through to clarify my thinking. He keeps up a funny, cynical dialogue with a pretend reader which is funny but also clarifies a lot of what he’s writing about. This is a really good device.”

“Finally I appreciated that Hoxter doesn’t force his ‘W’ model of screenplay structure down your throat as the only way of doing things. He often reminds you (too often maybe, we get it!) that it is just one way of thinking about stories but that it can be a helpful reference if you get stuck. I liked the model anyway, it seems logical and I’m sure works for most mainstream movies. He also links it in to some really interesting discussions about why we human beings enjoy stories and how movies are linked through history to the earliest kinds of storytelling, way before the Greeks.”

Some people read this blog – Shock!

Dear friends, regulars, casual readers and people searching for creepy stuff who just got here by mistake (I’m looking at you, yes you – you know who you are),

This is a quick note to thank you for taking a look at Write What You Don’t Know.com. We have been going for about three months now and I’m pleased to report that our readership has more than doubled each month. Of course we are still a teeny, tiny, micro, compact and bijoux site but our monthly readership now ranks in the thousands. Yes that’s thousand with an ‘s’. Not many thousands to be sure, but more than one.

This blog was never intended to be a mass appeal kind of deal. Its purpose was always to help my students, big up their achievements, allow me to rant occasionally and to publicize my book and other doings. In other words a fairly normal blog. I don’t anticipate we will grow all that much further in terms of readership. Even if the readership levels out, the enterprise feels worthwhile. I am very happy that people are finding valuable content and links here.

So spread the word and feel free to comment and contribute.

And once again, thanks all and keep writing what you don’t know!

Love,

Julian xx

 

 

Contribute to Write What You Don’t Know

I am open to pitches for posts on screenwriting, Baby Steps stories, screenwriting events and movie reviews – especially for little indie gems I may have missed and sucky mainstream crap I won’t go and see!

In the first instance send me a brief proposal for what you want to write or information about a new screenwriting product, service or event to hoxter@sfsu.edu, no spam please it’s just not cool.

Baby Steps

Helping your foot meet their door

Welcome everyone to Baby Steps, a new feature on the blog aimed at film students looking for help and advice about making the leap from college to the professional world. Baby Steps is all about taking those first… baby steps into a new world. It is about how those who have gone before you jammed their feet in the doors of the media and, more importantly, kept them there.

One of the hardest things to do as a film school professor is to answer the question that every graduating student asks: “how do I get my start?” The problem is that there are as many answers as there are students asking. We can give general advice but we know that those people who succeed tend to hack their own routes out of the jungle, machete in hand. With that in mind, Baby Steps will offer short interviews with recent film school graduates and established filmmakers who can still remember how they made their first moves.

My hope is that this feature will offer a wide range of examples, advice and support as well as introducing you to an inspiring and eclectic group of filmmakers who have at least one thing in common, they were all just like you once!

Julian

Recent Articles

30
Jan

Academy Award Nominations by Capture Formats they used

Features Nominated for Best Picture and/or Outstanding Cinematography by the AMPAS and ASC along with the Directors, DPs, and formats they employed

- Amour, Director Michael Haneke, DP Darius Khondji Camera/Format: Arri Alexa, ARRIRAW, Cooke Spherical
- Argo, Director Ben Affleck, DP Rodrigo Prieto, Camera ARRI Alexa, ARRIRAW, with some 35mm, 16mm, and 8mm mixed in

- Beasts of the Southern Wild, Director Bhen Zeitlin, DP Ben Richardson
Camera: ARRI 16SR3, S16 Kodak Film, Zeiss Lenses, Spherical

- Django Unchained, Director Quentin Tarantino, DP Robert Richardson, ASC, Camera/Format Panavision on 35mm Kodak Film, Anamorphic

- Les Misérables, Director Tom Hooper, DP Danny Cohen Camera/Format, Arricam, S35mm Kodak Film, Spherical

- Life of Pi, Director Ang Lee, DP Claudio Miranda, ASC, Head of Stereography Graham D. Clark, (DCS Member), Stereographer, Brian Gardner, Camera/Format Arri Alexa, PACE Fusion 3-D

- Lincoln, Director Steven Spielberg., DP Janusz Kaminski, Camera/Format: Panavision on S35mm Kodak Film

- Silver Linings Playbook, Director David O. Russell, DP Masanobu Takayanagi, Camera/Format, Arricam, S35mm Kodak Film, Spherical

- Zero Dark Thirty, Director Kathryn Bigelow, DP Greig Fraser, Camera/Format: Arri Alexa, ARRIRAW, Cooke Spherical

- Anna Karenina, Director Joe Wright, DP Seamus McGarvey Camera/Format Panavision on 35mm Kodak Film, Anamorphic

- Skyfall, Director Sam Mendes, DP Roger Deakins, ASC, BSC, Camer/Format: ARRI Alexa, ARRIRAW, with some RED Epic REDcode RAW mixed in for 2nd Unit Action Shots.

Compiled by James Mathers with data collected from IMDBpro

30
Jan

Harrison Ford’s copy of Raiders screenplay.

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Marc Bernardin’s blog has photos of what appears to be Harrison Ford’s copy of the screenplay for Raiders of the Lost Ark, complete with his notes. Makes interesting reading and shows how actors respond to lines on the page. What works in the mouth and what works on the page are not necessarily the same!

24
Jan

NY Times praises Interior. Leather Bar.

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Under this headline, Manohla Dargis in the NY Times praises Travis Mathews and James Franco’s film.

Independent Voices Drown Out the Buzz: Highlights of the Sundance Film Festival

“One of the sharpest, best surprises of the festival, which ends Sunday, “Interior. Leather Bar.” is a serious yet playful hourlong deconstruction of the representation of homosexuality as viewed through the prism of “Cruising,”William Friedkin’s 1980 film about an undercover cop, played by a supremely jittery Al Pacino, searching for a killer of gay men. “Interior,” directed by Mr. Franco and Travis Mathews, uses as its conceptual jumping-off point a lost 40-minute segment of “Cruising” set in a gay leather bar that Mr. Friedkin has said he had to cut to avoid an X rating. “Interior” primarily turns on the on-set experience of Val Lauren, an actor who appears as himself and as an idea of Mr. Pacino’s, while performing in a re-creation of the missing “Cruising” material.”

Congrats to them and all who worked on the movie.

20
Jan

Interior. Leather Bar. Premiered – great reviews.

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Travis and James gave their film a very promising debut in Sundance last night. Interior. Leather Bar. is picking up a number of positive, thoughtful reviews.

Ioncinema

Film Threat

Hollywood Reporter

Indiewire

 

 

19
Jan

Check out the interview piece I wrote for Filmmaker Magazine

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Here’s the opening:

“San Francisco-based gay filmmaker Travis Mathews built his reputation as one of the leading figures in the latest new wave of gay independent cinema on the back of a series of award-winning intimate, confessional documentary films about young homosexual men: In Their Room. His first narrative feature, I Want Your Love, explored gay friends negotiating their way towards and through sexual relationships and featured unsimulated sex. His new film, Interior. Leather Bar., co-directed with the actor James Franco, is just as honest in its depictions. This film within a film begins with a re-imagining of the lost forty minutes of William Friedkin’s controversial 1980 thriller Cruising and expands to engage with wider issues of creative freedom explored in frank “behind the scenes” sequences with cast and crew.

Filmmaker spoke to Travis while he was packing for an early morning trip to the Sundance Film Festival…”

Follow the link to Filmmaker for more:

16
Jan

Travis Matthews on Interior. Leather Bar.

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Here’s an entertaining interview with Travis about his work and especially Interior. Leather Bar.

15
Jan

James Franco on ‘Interior. Leather Bar.’

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Here’s a link to an interview with James Franco who co-directed the feature ‘Interior. Leather Bar’  that will premier at Sundance in a few days. I was a story consultant, working with Travis Matthews, the writer and co-director. Fingers crossed it gets a good response!

11
Jan

Top Ten Films (belated) of 2012.

 

This year, because it was the year of the curate’s egg, I’m making up my own rules. In that spirit I get to pick whole movies or just the parts that are worth the list. Also these are the films I liked and admired most, not necessarily ‘the best’.

 

Omissions:

I couldn’t face a Tarantino movie at Xmas so haven’t seen Django Unchained.

I couldn’t face two and a half hours of singing French drama peasants so I haven’t seen The Glums Movie.

I haven’t seen The Master because… sigh.

I haven’t seen Seven Psychopaths, despite being a fan of Martin McDonagh, and should be beaten with sticks and I meant to see it and I will and /whine.

So, onwards…

 

Favorites

Safety Not Guaranteed charmer of the year.

Beasts of the Southern Wild truly imaginative.

The Cabin in the Woods yes, yes, I know… but yes!

Moonrise Kingdom only the parts with no adults… apart from Bruce Willis, surprisingly.

Your Sister’s Sister just really solid indie writing, directing and acting.

Robot and Frank mawkish and contrived but it made me smile. And Frank Langella.

Lawless because sometimes implausible rednecks are necessary.

The Perks of Being a Wallflower all the bits I didn’t hate, not the bits I did.

Looper for JGL’s fake chin. And my hero Rian Johnson can do no wrong.

Argo old fashioned in the best way.

Lincoln apart from the opening mawkish nonsense with the soldiers, and I’m pretending it ended where the story should have, with Lincoln walking into the darkness before the assassination.

Hmm… where were all the foreign films I loved this year?

 

Bottom Ten Films

Prometheus… That about covers it.

 

And the 2012 ‘Julian’s childhood fantasy worlds revisited, without total ruination award’ goes to…

Dredd for keeping his helmet on.

 

 

8
Dec

Cutterjunk: “a hard science fiction novel come to life…”

I just received some very promising competition coverage on my little first draft science fiction spec screenplay Cutterjunk from three reviewers. Some of the highlights are below. Apart from the temptation to engage in a certain amount of own horn tooting, I’m posting them because I’m particularly pleased that many of the comments reflect lessons I try and teach my students in class. SFSU cinema majors read down to find how actual script readers look for the things I keep telling you they look for!

“The writing is very good. This script is like an excellent sci fi novel.”

“The world the writer has created is unique and the language is amazing. The invented jargon is strange yet relatable, like Firefly or Clockwork Orange. The main character is very likable and sympathetic and the reader is emotionally invested by page 20.”

“This script is a hard science fiction novel come to life. The setting is unique and very visual.”

“The characters really pop in this script in large part thanks to the amazing dialogue. The world of the screenplay has its own invented jargon and slang. This is often a trap for other writers but this script gets it right. The slang is evocative, exotic, but understandable. It has a good rhythm to it. The dialogue flows instead of sounding forced or fake much like Clockwork Orange or Firefly.”

“As a piece of writing it’s extraordinary. It takes the reader on an incredible journey to an imaginary place that feels as real as next door. The characters are truly special and the dialogue is fantastic.”

Cutterjunk
12-1069-SCI
SCORE
STORY/PLOT
8
DIALOGUE
10
CHARACTER
 10
STRUCTURE
 8
MARKETABILITY
 7
FIRST 20 PAGES
 9
COMPETITION TOTAL
52
SCRIPT
RECOMMEND

 

18
Nov

The Drip Drip Drip of Recognition…

Image…drops once more for my little first draft science fiction screenplay ‘Cutterjunk’. I’m delighted  to hear that it is a finalist for the Gimme Credit International Screenplay Competition. Coopy, Mousehouse, Dipper and all the gang are thrilled and many alco-lozenges will be swallowed at Charybdis Starside Station tonight.

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